New and improved Web site! Let me know what you think.

The design is ok but I couldn't get it to render correctly in Firefox for some reason. The right side of the lettering went out of the box. I tried another browser and it was ok so not sure what's up there. Like I said I like the design of it...Looks good!
 
Not bad site...but
Your first picture is of a truck and trailer with no signs.... looks unprofessional. I'd change it to a great picture of a property you did.
Formatting on the "services" and "about us" page is off.

Your fonts also change on the site as well.
And for me there is too much white space.

Dang that sounded harsh.
 
Looks good "are" needs to be change to "our" on this paragraph:


At Aqua Clean We don’t mind if you turn down are business to go with a competitor,
But make sure to ask the right questions, Are they insured? What kind of pressure
will be used on my home? Will their soaps or chemicals damage my plants or grass?
These are questions as a Property Owner or Manager that you need to ask, after
all your property is your biggest investment.
 
Not bad site...but
Your first picture is of a truck and trailer with no signs.... looks unprofessional. I'd change it to a great picture of a property you did.
Formatting on the "services" and "about us" page is off.

Your fonts also change on the site as well.
And for me there is too much white space.

Dang that sounded harsh.


No that was good David, The magnets for the truck will be ready Tuesday, as well as the banners for the trailer, so a new picture will be posted then.

Ill check the formatting, And what should i do with the white space.

John
 
Looks good "are" needs to be change to "our" on this paragraph:


At Aqua Clean We don’t mind if you turn down are business to go with a competitor,
But make sure to ask the right questions, Are they insured? What kind of pressure
will be used on my home? Will their soaps or chemicals damage my plants or grass?
These are questions as a Property Owner or Manager that you need to ask, after
all your property is your biggest investment.

Thank you!!
 
No that was good David, The magnets for the truck will be ready Tuesday, as well as the banners for the trailer, so a new picture will be posted then.

Ill check the formatting, And what should i do with the white space.

John
You can separate sections by bold facing the text of the title instead of using so many <br> (break commands) to do it.
 
I think it look great. I have to get one up and running. The problem is I know nothing about them. How much does it cost you per month?
 
John, remember what I shared with you about the backdrop area and text during our phone conversation.

It will be "your friend".

5 calls today ( on a Sunday for bids this coming week ).
 
Will do just thought of some more..

Im bartering work for 2 magnets and 3 18 X 48 inch banners

Im also Bartering for a spot in may's Memorial District coupon book.

Hopefully I will get some calls... Im soooo Dead.. Im putting out fliers everyday, and talking to business owners, as well as emails.. ad clicks account. yahoo msn, google, criags list, back page... whew everywhere


Just needs some dang work.

John
 
Looks good John.

And take OUT those hidden words. The search engine WILL find them and they WILL boot you.

You got to get that truck lettered!! I have a guy that will come to your house, design print and install the truck stickers for about $400. No magnets..please no magnets.....
 
Looks good John.

And take OUT those hidden words. The search engine WILL find them and they WILL boot you.

You got to get that truck lettered!! I have a guy that will come to your house, design print and install the truck stickers for about $400. No magnets..please no magnets.....


LOL the magnets are free... So its in the budget right now, I do want to get it lettered in the future..

My truck would look sweet lettered too.

About the hidden words.. Why will they boot me? There not Ghost they are just in white text.

John
 
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