I really like the bottom part that shows your name and contact info.
The before and after picture is pretty decent.
The headline is too bold or too fat of a font.
You tell me that my fence will look new but all I see is what appears to be a low quality rough board fence that is dripping wet. That is just too much roughness for the women that you want to attract. You really need to show me a new looking fence, almost of a setting that a fence manufacturer would show. At least go back and get an after shot that is dry/sealed/stained for the big picture.
Disclaimer* I could not produce anything near like what you have created. I think that it is an impressive piece for being designed by a fence cleaner. But we're not here to impress ourselves and although I am sure that everyone that loves you will be impressed by your efforts, we really need to look at it through the eyeglasses of your future customers.
Did I mention that you've got a great outline and beginning of a nice piece here?
