John B,
I edited your letter. What I would also suggest is that you get a name to write to rather than addressing to "Dear Sirs." See how this works for you:
Many restaurant owners today are not satisfied with the fire equipment, concrete cleaning and vent hood cleaning services they currently use. We want to change that! In an effort to provide better and more affordable services to Backyard Burgers, B&R Fire Protection/ Vent-A-Hood Cleaning (A division of Bevalaque Maintenance Company since 1989) is proud to offer you outstanding high pressure steam cleaning and fire protection equipment services.
B&R Fire Protection promises the most reliable and affordable service in the area. Our fire equipment service rates are 10% less than the competition and with each inspection performed by B&R you receive a full system report and a certificate of inspection.
Vent hood cleanings are documented with photos in addition to the certificate of completion which is placed on the vent hood showing areas cleaned, the date of the cleaning and the next due date. So B&R not only tells you it’s clean we actually show you it’s clean.
Our concrete cleaning service is performed after business hours and B&R will remove most oil stains, bubble gum, and dirt from your drive thru as well as your sidewalks.
Do you want better and more reliable service? Call and visit B&R Fire Protection on the web at:
www.firepros.4t.com www.pressurewash.8m.com
601-352-3809 601-573-5509
E-Mail us at
brfirepros@bellsouth.net
Looking forward to serving you,
John Bevalaque
CEO