Who is your target audience?
In my opinion, depending on who they are going to, you may be better putting the info on to a simply designed postcard. Or if you are sticking with the tri-fold I would suggest using a pre-made template or if your budget allows, having one designed.
Not bashing, just think that marketing material can sometimes mislead your target audience about who or what you are... and the kind of service you deliver.
Hi Kory,
The mission statement looks funny, maybe it's just my computer, It looks like the header overlaps the body copy. I would start all of the columns at the same height, they are uneven. I would even them out on both sides.
How many are you having printed and who is doing the printing? Thanks
Thanks for the comments guys! I kept it short and sweet due to the fact that most people today have mild A.D.D and are visualy stimulated and just don't have time. Henry your website looks great but after the first paragragh I quit reading when I saw how much stuff there was to read. I guess in my opnion it is information overload. I just want to wet the pallet and get them to call. I am in no way being defensive so please ceep the comments coming. Thank You!