Hey Joe,
Pretty good video. I do have a couple suggestions though since you're asking
When you watch that video does it answer the question "This is what you get?", or "This is what we've got, or do?" In my opinion, it says "This is what we do"...
Second, most people have no friggin clue that you are using some cool equipment that will not make a huge mess in their restaurant. The kind of equipment that low-balling scumbags don't use for the most part. Flaunt that in a way that says "This is what you get".
Indeed....great point. They are everywhere these days.
I disagree with my buddy Tony and would take that music off of there. You can mix voice and music to keep the attention up, but I wouldn't just have music for the whole video. Especially such a horrible song
Just kidding. What I'm talking about though is something
like this.
These aren't the videos I distribute but I use them as kind of a throw around on the net, kind of like a test market deal. I get lots of calls from them and they are strangely profitable, but when I do trade shows, marketing events and the like, I use a different set of vids, that were shot by a buddy of mine, they all look great, all of the videos you see on my youtube page, are usually shot just for the sake of proof of no liability with customers, I always cover myself. And these days more people seem to like to use them for there own purposes. And I am just waiting for ""someone"" to call some of the customers they see in these videos and tell them all kinds of ""great"" things about me, that as well seems to be something that ""some"" people are doing these days, and I use the word people loosely, they are more of the slime type that grows in a dumpster.
Another thing is your call to action is weak, and there is no deadline which makes it even weaker. "Call us to see what we can do for you" will have a very low response rate compared to something like "Call Before July 31st to receive a FREE dumpster Cleaning for Your Restaurant" would do much better.
True, but I target market with the vids and print, and use that approach when I do so. I am a big believer in sending out 500 pinpoint targeted packages rather then the broadcast market style.
Start collecting email addresses from potential customers and send them the link to this video and BAM, you got yourself a hit.
I am a huge data miner kind of guy, I am always collecting cards and info, everyone I know does the same thing for me, I have generated tons of work this way. I scour lots of data bases and collect all data for marketing merges and ad campaigns. I use thumb drives and cd's as well, I have auto open code put on them and it works great.
Hope this helps, and good luck Bro.
